I have this little game I like to play with Kevin O’Cunn at Word Riot. I send him a story, he rejects it. He did give a comment this time, though, roughly: more story, less artifice. I can feel that.
Vestal Review says, “Good writing, well told, just not quite right for us. Sorry to say no.” Nice of them to say so. Mixer appreciates the chance &c. Comets & Criminals thanks me but unfortunately &c.